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One *Single* Haiku for you too.. (2)

Started by MelodyB, April 18, 2007, 01:41:51 PM

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Newsman

Snow falls and winds blow

Snowmen stand as sentinels

Guarding winter's glow

SippinTea

*laugh* at the first

And the second? Wow. I love that. :)

:beret:
"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

Classicrambler

 snow white

     rain

   bare sidewalks

RainbowJingles

Snow woman stands tall
Here's a date for Sir Newsman
Perfectly frozen

SippinTea

"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

RainbowJingles

Snow woman is cold
Melody? what can I do???
Hot latte!  Puddle...

MelodyB

Have you slapped that one dude from Indiana with a pie in the face today?
 

apsurf

snow woman frozen
how can I help set her free?
a hot branding iron!

Newsman

Snow falls, drifts, sifts, calls

From winter's cold wonderland

Heart stirs, takes in all

Newsman

A blanket of white

And a sky full of snow's show

Dazzles, mellows, all

MelodyB

Here is summer like heat
Hurry, quick! Turn on the A C!
February in Florida



(This one is TRUE, I turned on the AC yesterday)
Have you slapped that one dude from Indiana with a pie in the face today?
 

Nerd

Spring is closing in

with new determination

Pushes on persistently

RainbowJingles

Cali Christmastime
No snow, no cold, no heaters
Go ride your new bike!



:sadbounce:

I miss the snow.  *sigh*

Newsman

Winter's last snowfall

Carpetting the paths between

Year's end and new spring

SippinTea

Last? Last?! Noooooooooooooooooooooo....

:beret:
"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

RainbowJingles

Rainy cloudy days
Chilly fingers, freezing toes
Blanket, pillow, please!

Newsman

Where shadows stand talll

And heroes fall in dark night

Our faith stands in God


Newsman

First snowfall delight

White, serene, pure, and so bright

Visual delight

SippinTea


John, much as I enjoy the snow poems.... this one:

Quote from: Newsman on February 23, 2008, 06:52:06 AM
Where shadows stand talll

And heroes fall in dark night

Our faith stands in God

that one.... that was absolutely fabulous.  :great:

:beret:
"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

Newsman

Alternate version
----------------

Where shadows stand tall,

And heroes fall, darkness calls,

Our faith stands in God


B

fresh breeze hits my face
shafts of light brighten the room
I smile now - she's here

B

SippinTea

Awww... I like it. *smile*

Wait a minute! 'She' who? Hmmm....

:beret:
"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

B

#297
haha no one, in particular.yet.

Glad you like it! :teeth:

B

SippinTea

This is totally  :offtopic: but...

Have you heard the album Something About Us by Michael O'Brien? Sometimes your poetry remind me of his lyrics.

:beret:
"Going somewhere means leaving somewhere. Choosing something means choosing against other things. Gaining something means losing something else. And between the old and new--the 'was' and the 'not yet'--there exists only one thing: a very frightening journey called faith."
--taken from the book Coming Up For Air

MelodyB

Drat! I saw that one B...I should have quoted when I had the chance!
Have you slapped that one dude from Indiana with a pie in the face today?